I cannot think.
Life is at a standstill.
I'm waiting on something, I don't quite know what.
I'm living in half light.
Somebody save me.
I will weaken, I am
I just need to be held, if only for a while.
Because I'm living in half light.
I don't want understanding,
I cannot get it
I don't want solitude, I want nearness
But I'm living in half light.
Something is terribly wrong, I shouldn't be feeling this way
I'm surrounded by nightmares
Someone take them away.
Please.
I cannot continue living in this half light.
17 comments:
im on my way... its a tiring 9 hour flight tho, andd not to mention the gruellng trip in the snow by train to bhx international then the security check that takes ages, then the flight itself where i have to listen and bear all sorts of bollox, then the immigration procedure, and the baggage reclaim , oh and then while dodging all the dhoom machale boys, if my memory serves me correctly, ill take the ring road straight to ***** and missed call Meher, all this while tackling jetlag and the other issues that currently are making life phenomenal for me, but the big question is meher sure that she's got time for me tho?
P.S im sorry bout tonight, i had major big problem at uni. im kinda screewed.
Nice!!
waise.. i dont understand poems.. :D
well written!
gives a vision of ur heart!
m there sweety nd il bring the other 'half' lite back.... ;)
very cute poem!i liked it!
you might find light at the end of the tunnel...but is it the same as enlightenment ;)
you write well ... i repeat my words :D
The poem is DARK.It is concealing something...but somethings in life are not to be revealed.Your state of mind is probably the only thing which is elaborate in this poem...It's good!!!!..I really appreciate the simplicity in choice of words :)
tooo long too long... seriously time for a new write up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Meher ji!
I openly accept criticism as i accept praise..... if u didn.. like my posts! .. u can atleast tell wat mistakes i did? so that i can learn.. i m not a proffesional.. just someone with a passion to write! :)
the poem is so simple n so subtle... it makes me think that even i am living in half light.... but trust me ull be enlighted.. lol
...................... (blank) thats how i am ... a very well written thoughts ...
nice..
I agree there are times wen all u need is a shoulder..and assurance tht someone is there for u.. with u.. Someone who can give u tht ray of hope if nothing else...
a simple yet really well written poem...
ouuhh mann!! i jus luv the depth f ur poems...nt superficial at all...wordswrth in making
hmm its a bit morbid n gloomy....buh its very nicely written.....every1 needs sm1 to be sm1 wid whom u can be sm1....[:)]..!!
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